Apr 26, 2017

Week 2 - Rajdeep Choudhury



Sketch:


Tried to fix some values

1 comment:

  1. VEry promising!

    1-Good job on the photobash
    2-You really need to improve your sketches, your values, and your drawing
    3-Its lacking a bit of contrast, around the car and girl.
    4-You need to learn more about lighting. The sky is pretty clear i mean we should see a stronger ligt hit the car ad part ofthe girl, and we should have interesting cast shadows shapes
    5-Nice choice of colors but still needs balance, and with the propoer light, the colors will follow better.
    6-Did you trace perspective lines ?
    7-You need to pratice anatomy.
    8-I would have left one sky color, either blue on the right or the lighter bluish purple of the left. I like the strong blue because it create contrast.

    Good job !

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