Hey Elkhan, here are some pointers.
Its actually really good and promising :
The two images that work best are the last two because the car and pilot are not fighting in terms of composition and image reading.
The first pilots pose is really cool but you are leaving very little space in front of the cars, in all four images. Thats what mainly creates the conflict in the first and second images.
You could save the first two by adding much more space in front the car and less space to the left of the pilot. Either way i did some changes on the last two images.
All that is green is good.
Make sure that on the last image, your pilot is drawn in the right perspective. Right now she seems to be full front view but the car is viewed from above.
Nice BG lines directing the viewer to the focus points. Good call.
Now ... this is not a class in design and you are free to chose whatever looks your designs have. But If you are aiming for a generic scifi or futuristic car...it better be damn good, man. Either its really well rendered and decorated or its super slick or... something has to save its normal design.
Next step, lighting.
1-Where is your main light coming from
2-Where is your secondary light
3-If you feel comfortable enough add a 3rd light or try placing your bounce lights
4-Black and white value sketch or color sketch...your choice.
Okay cool thanks for the quick feedback! I'll update it soon.
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