1-The table is falling yo. That thing is coming down. So if you tilt something, everything has to follow. 2-The foreground props are really interesting but too faded with the rest so its tough to see them. ANd i would add more, to make it more dense with stuff. Labs should feel crazy. 3-Same comment for the BG, its suppose to be full of crap all over the place. Make it awesome. 4-Ok light but your secondary light source is not well placed and too weak. It shoudl be opposing the main light source. Maybe from up top like a window in the ceiling. 5-Costume design..... come on ! You should have an amazing costume here. 6-Values are way off, its really hard to see. The hat is almost the same value as the BG etc. 7-Need to be better with your overpainting skills, still feels like the face is 3d.
To work on: -Drawing, color and values. -Do a lot of value practices -Do tons of life studies -Design, everything has to be amazing
Hey Seif,
ReplyDeleteNice save, but still needs a lot more.
1-The table is falling yo. That thing is coming down. So if you tilt something, everything has to follow.
2-The foreground props are really interesting but too faded with the rest so its tough to see them. ANd i would add more, to make it more dense with stuff. Labs should feel crazy.
3-Same comment for the BG, its suppose to be full of crap all over the place. Make it awesome.
4-Ok light but your secondary light source is not well placed and too weak. It shoudl be opposing the main light source. Maybe from up top like a window in the ceiling.
5-Costume design..... come on ! You should have an amazing costume here.
6-Values are way off, its really hard to see. The hat is almost the same value as the BG etc.
7-Need to be better with your overpainting skills, still feels like the face is 3d.
To work on:
-Drawing, color and values.
-Do a lot of value practices
-Do tons of life studies
-Design, everything has to be amazing