Okay so i totally scrapped my thumbnails from last week because they sucked. Hopefully Fred you'll see this soon for some feedback on composition?
By the way it's not going to stay 100% rainbow, my underpainting is just kind of ridiculous, and I know it's still really rough. All nighter huzzah
I'm thinking of zooming in a bit to the upper left so someone looking at it can actually see the faces, but it ruins the outline created by the figures +bathtub+drapery. Thoughts?

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