Seif Ragab - Final

Week 8 - Seif Ragab

I know the poses need a lot of work but these are just place holders to show the composition

Seif Ragab - Week 8 sketches

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Seif Ragab- Week 7

Seif Ragab -Week 7 Sketches

Seif Ragab - Week 6

Seif Ragab - Week 5 - Sketches

These are sketches for "the bishop" its like an underground chess/gambling club where players often pay their life as a price of their loss.

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Seif Ragab - Week 4

not sure which one to go with for the forground figure.

Seif Ragab - Week 4 sketch

Seif Ragab - Week 3

Seif Ragab, Week 3 B&W comps

Seif Ragab - Week 2

Since every screen gives me a different exposure result, heres one with adjusted contrast for high contrast screens. Fred, if you have any tips on screen calibration that would be awesome!

Week 2 Feedback for Seif Sketches

Wow, this is very very good. First image works because its cinematic. ANd has nice foreground elements. 

Only one comment here but its not that dramatic, i mean you could leave it this way. BUt the girl is straight up in the middle of the image, i would test and see if i move it a bit to the right like so.

Now in terms of design, its ok but mainly because you nailed the values ( light) and the realism. 

So this shows everyone, that a good presentation can make a normal design look great. ANd the opposite is also true.

This is not a design class, so you do not have to push the designs but if i were you, later one, for my portfolio, i would improve the designs of the boots and mecha. Right now the boots are too cartoony. Old school design. ANd the vehicle also looks a bit funny with the chubby little legs etc. But do that later on. Your composition was great, simple and solid. Good job.

Seif Ragab - Week 2 B&W sketch

Not sure which composition to go with

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Week 1 - Seif Ragab