Week 2 - Sally

WIP

Week 2 - Elkhan

Ben Redekop - Week 2

Hey Fred, I'm just wondering if you could give me some feedback on this recent illustration if you have some time. 

Week 2 - Zach

Nick week 2, Assignment 2

Week 2 - Alex

Week 2 - Krist Miha

I also uploaded a cropped version cause I feel it's more dynamic and prefer it over the other one. 

Cropped

Week 2 - Dani McCole

Was super conflicted on which comp to use. I went with this one because it had the most "attitude."  However I'm not sure if it were still the best choice as an overall comp. 

Week 2 - Rajdeep Choudhury

Sketch:


Tried to fix some values

Week 2-Jaria

Seif Ragab - Week 2

Since every screen gives me a different exposure result, heres one with adjusted contrast for high contrast screens. Fred, if you have any tips on screen calibration that would be awesome!

Week 2 Miguel Mendez

Week 2 - Efe Vardar

Week 2 Jin T.T

          after 1st feedback corrected and played with composition with design of vehicle in mind.

Week 2 (WIP) - Dani

Brainstorm Sketches:

Comp. Thumbnails

She's a rough'n tough gal. Dune Buggies and brass knuckles are her style. She'll slam your racer off the course with no remorse. Punk.

Week 2 - Rajdeep WIP Sketches

Its more of a desert-rocky landscape behind. And the vehicle/look is majorly inspired by Mad max. Kind of post-apocalyptic. But I am still trying to figure out ways to integrate the driver and the car with common design elements.

Seif Ragab - Week 2 B&W sketch

Not sure which composition to go with

V2:

Week 2 - Krist Miha WIP

This is my WIP so far, it's pretty rough. I'm trying to figure out colors and composition still. I know I need to kill the photos in the BG, fix some perspective issues and start refining the focal points.

Some feedback would help a lot.

Week 2 - Alex thumbnails

Sketches of sketch

Jin week 2 sketches