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Week 01 Feedback for Jessica Seto BW Sketch
Week 01 Feedback for Jessica Seto, Black and white WIP
Great job Jessica! I have little to say except watch out for tangents. You can see here the areas where i have put a red cross.
You have two choices, you either create an overlap or you separate them more. FOr the hat and the blade i would separate them. The watch could overlap on top of the scarf thingy, and the hilt of the sword could overlap on top of the hat or be separated more etc.
Overall this is excellent. Great desicion in tilting the camera, it makes your image dynamic, and moody. Great angle as well, from the bottom, incresing the tension, and drama. Love the elegance of your lines and the bloodborne feel. Great choice of background and light. This is a great example of a sketch you can send a client. You can proceed with the final.
Great job Jessica! I have little to say except watch out for tangents. You can see here the areas where i have put a red cross.
You have two choices, you either create an overlap or you separate them more. FOr the hat and the blade i would separate them. The watch could overlap on top of the scarf thingy, and the hilt of the sword could overlap on top of the hat or be separated more etc.
Overall this is excellent. Great desicion in tilting the camera, it makes your image dynamic, and moody. Great angle as well, from the bottom, incresing the tension, and drama. Love the elegance of your lines and the bloodborne feel. Great choice of background and light. This is a great example of a sketch you can send a client. You can proceed with the final.
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