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Jin - week 4 sketches
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| I wasnt really satisfied and played around more combining the intentions from sketches 4 and 5. |
May 4, 2017
Apr 26, 2017
Week 2 Jin T.T
Apr 24, 2017
Week 2 Feedback Jin Thumbs 01
Week 2 Feedback Jin Thumbs 01
Hey Jin,
Some cool things here in terms of composition.
I like things on the three of them.
BUT...;)
First Image:
1-You clearly need more space up top. SInce the frame is almost touching the canon
2-The canon is melting and droopy. Add the close image frame and it seems that its being pushed down by the tension. Droopyness and melted drawings in hard surface is the enemy. Make sure that it looks strong and well built since it is a weapon.
3-I like the pose of the girl, make sure we understand if she is standing in front or leaning against the truck.
4-She is almost perfectly placed between the two tires. Move here to the left or way to the right after the canon.
5-Too much space where the smoke is. Its empty.
6-I would move the whole set up to the right so i get less space on the right and more to the left.
Its always better to have more space where things are facing, than behind them.
Second Image :
1-Very nice combo and angle for the truck and the girl. She looks like wonder woman though !
2-HUGE space on the right....
3-Move the whole setup to the right so wonder woman is on the right of the middle line.
4-Or add something there to justify the space. Something important that can increase your storytelling.
Third Image :
1-I feel that she should be a bit more to the right, like her leg should hit the middle of the tire.
2-Her pose is a bit weird. Super centered and symmetrical.
3-The vehicle could be longer on the left to cover more BG.
4-Good use of cloud direction
Overall:
-Almost good compos
-These are more thumbs than skecthes, so same advice as for everyone, for yourself, and to avoid futur trouble, make sure you clarify the drawing and design before jumping to the painting. Know where you are going.
-There is no real design yet, but make sure that your designs are great. Right now its a pick up truck with a canon on the back and some sort of tractor piece upside down attached to the front.
-Ask yourself when designing an man made object with a function.What does this do? HOW does it work? How is it built?
Hey Jin,
Some cool things here in terms of composition.
I like things on the three of them.
BUT...;)
First Image:
1-You clearly need more space up top. SInce the frame is almost touching the canon
2-The canon is melting and droopy. Add the close image frame and it seems that its being pushed down by the tension. Droopyness and melted drawings in hard surface is the enemy. Make sure that it looks strong and well built since it is a weapon.
3-I like the pose of the girl, make sure we understand if she is standing in front or leaning against the truck.
4-She is almost perfectly placed between the two tires. Move here to the left or way to the right after the canon.
5-Too much space where the smoke is. Its empty.
6-I would move the whole set up to the right so i get less space on the right and more to the left.
Its always better to have more space where things are facing, than behind them.
Second Image :
1-Very nice combo and angle for the truck and the girl. She looks like wonder woman though !
2-HUGE space on the right....
3-Move the whole setup to the right so wonder woman is on the right of the middle line.
4-Or add something there to justify the space. Something important that can increase your storytelling.
Third Image :
1-I feel that she should be a bit more to the right, like her leg should hit the middle of the tire.
2-Her pose is a bit weird. Super centered and symmetrical.
3-The vehicle could be longer on the left to cover more BG.
4-Good use of cloud direction
Overall:
-Almost good compos
-These are more thumbs than skecthes, so same advice as for everyone, for yourself, and to avoid futur trouble, make sure you clarify the drawing and design before jumping to the painting. Know where you are going.
-There is no real design yet, but make sure that your designs are great. Right now its a pick up truck with a canon on the back and some sort of tractor piece upside down attached to the front.
-Ask yourself when designing an man made object with a function.What does this do? HOW does it work? How is it built?
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