Some comments: 1-Sketches have better framing thus better compo. What happened ? 2-Girl is aligned with pipe on top, move her slightly to the right and open door window. Or move her a bit to the left. 3-That light valued fog is killing your depth, and merging with the values of the car, lowering contrast and making it hard to read the shape of the car. 4-Girl design is lacking. Should be ten times more interesting that this. 5-The car shoul dbe a bit longer, you could extend the back a bit, but its not a necessity. Its ok. 6-Good effort on giving life to your car design, it saved your image. 7-We need to see that canon, it being a main feature of its shape. 8-Try to use your values better next time.
Very good !
ReplyDeleteSome comments:
1-Sketches have better framing thus better compo. What happened ?
2-Girl is aligned with pipe on top, move her slightly to the right and open door window. Or move her a bit to the left.
3-That light valued fog is killing your depth, and merging with the values of the car, lowering contrast and making it hard to read the shape of the car.
4-Girl design is lacking. Should be ten times more interesting that this.
5-The car shoul dbe a bit longer, you could extend the back a bit, but its not a necessity. Its ok.
6-Good effort on giving life to your car design, it saved your image.
7-We need to see that canon, it being a main feature of its shape.
8-Try to use your values better next time.
Good work !