COmments: 1-Ok so.....now the vehicle works better but come on....it's too easy ;). It feels more strong and stable but more like a slow tractor than a race vehicle. 2-The character feels a bit big. I feel she could be smaller and like that your compo would be better balanced. Because right now she is the same height of the car. 3-Her costume is ok, but her drawing could be better. Anatomy etc. 4- Overall it's a big improvement compared to the previous homework.
Next time try and find one to three photo refs that have the colors and the light you want. For example here finding a desert photo with a clear blue sky and having environment and color/shadow info would have been super easy. Using that as photobash or just as a ref to keep on the side while you paint, would have taken your image to a much higher level.
Hey Miguel,
ReplyDeleteOk so much better than the first sketch.
COmments:
1-Ok so.....now the vehicle works better but come on....it's too easy ;). It feels more strong and stable but more like a slow tractor than a race vehicle.
2-The character feels a bit big. I feel she could be smaller and like that your compo would be better balanced. Because right now she is the same height of the car.
3-Her costume is ok, but her drawing could be better. Anatomy etc.
4- Overall it's a big improvement compared to the previous homework.
Next time try and find one to three photo refs that have the colors and the light you want. For example here finding a desert photo with a clear blue sky and having environment and color/shadow info would have been super easy. Using that as photobash or just as a ref to keep on the side while you paint, would have taken your image to a much higher level.