1-Your sketch is good but no BG and vaues are too dark. And this is present in your final. 2-You have 4 light sources, ythat is overkill and way way too complicated. So windows are ok, low moon light soft etc. The candles should be blown and with a trail of smoke, implying wind and forces in action, and it shut downs a light. WHich is needed here. The fire should be stronger and intense....like a fire., The skulls and crackling are ok i think. 3-Design : BG is good. Well done. Her costume is way too simple, it needs more excitement man. 4-FX are well done i think 5-Values are off, we cant see much of the fire and books. 6-The candles are way too soft and unclear. They should look great. 7-Check your perspective, even though the BG is good its off, make sure its solid next time. 8-Anatomy...... hands!!!! Especially the one on the right.
To work on : -Anatomy -Value painting -Environment drawing -COlor, value, drawing skills in general -Do life studies, it will take you very far
Hey Zach,
ReplyDeleteThis is pretty good.
1-Your sketch is good but no BG and vaues are too dark. And this is present in your final.
2-You have 4 light sources, ythat is overkill and way way too complicated. So windows are ok, low moon light soft etc. The candles should be blown and with a trail of smoke, implying wind and forces in action, and it shut downs a light. WHich is needed here. The fire should be stronger and intense....like a fire., The skulls and crackling are ok i think.
3-Design : BG is good. Well done. Her costume is way too simple, it needs more excitement man.
4-FX are well done i think
5-Values are off, we cant see much of the fire and books.
6-The candles are way too soft and unclear. They should look great.
7-Check your perspective, even though the BG is good its off, make sure its solid next time.
8-Anatomy...... hands!!!! Especially the one on the right.
To work on :
-Anatomy
-Value painting
-Environment drawing
-COlor, value, drawing skills in general
-Do life studies, it will take you very far