This is interesting, you clearly have your own vibe. But still :
-Hands. Because it is stylised the one on the left, you get away with it, but the one on the right. Nope. You need to draw tons of hands, and stylised ones and realistic ones etc. You have to kill it with hands. -You saved the shadow behind. Good call. BUT.... why is there a huge impact on the wall ? It is not clear for me. You need to make sure that if you add something, it is sort of self explanatory. -I would have toned down the light on the wall.... so my main focus is the girl. -SImple color scheme but it works, you saved your sketch i would say. But you need less saturation and contrast on areas that are not important and more on those that are important. You have a nice color variation on the upper right corner...but ....its the right upper corner! -Next time add a third color in the mix... to see how you do. -There is a lot going on because of the wall now, but her design remains simple and so is the creature. I wonder if in these cases it is not better to increase the stylisation of your image. We will talk about this this afternoon, 1 on 1.
Hey Beth,
ReplyDeleteThis is interesting, you clearly have your own vibe. But still :
-Hands. Because it is stylised the one on the left, you get away with it, but the one on the right. Nope. You need to draw tons of hands, and stylised ones and realistic ones etc. You have to kill it with hands.
-You saved the shadow behind. Good call. BUT.... why is there a huge impact on the wall ? It is not clear for me. You need to make sure that if you add something, it is sort of self explanatory.
-I would have toned down the light on the wall.... so my main focus is the girl.
-SImple color scheme but it works, you saved your sketch i would say. But you need less saturation and contrast on areas that are not important and more on those that are important. You have a nice color variation on the upper right corner...but ....its the right upper corner!
-Next time add a third color in the mix... to see how you do.
-There is a lot going on because of the wall now, but her design remains simple and so is the creature. I wonder if in these cases it is not better to increase the stylisation of your image. We will talk about this this afternoon, 1 on 1.