Alright so , i still prefer your sketch. Here is why:
1-You seem to have cropped the image or increase the size of the character on the final. It was ok before. 2-The dawing that was excellent was changed in certain areas. Your design and drawing were solved. You just needed to render it. 3-Background was much more creepy, and interesting with more depth as well, on the sketch. 4-There was a sharpness to the sword and drawing that was lost when you painted it 5-Hand touching the sword and the cape were better placed before.
Aside those things, you need to work on your FX painting and make sure you do not flatten your image with unecessary blur, grain and noise.
Aside that its still pretty good.
To work on : 1-FX 2-Background 3-Balance between your personal style and the generic realistic style that the industry demands. We can talk about this in class.
Hey Jessica,
ReplyDeleteAlright so , i still prefer your sketch. Here is why:
1-You seem to have cropped the image or increase the size of the character on the final. It was ok before.
2-The dawing that was excellent was changed in certain areas. Your design and drawing were solved. You just needed to render it.
3-Background was much more creepy, and interesting with more depth as well, on the sketch.
4-There was a sharpness to the sword and drawing that was lost when you painted it
5-Hand touching the sword and the cape were better placed before.
Aside those things, you need to work on your FX painting and make sure you do not flatten your image with unecessary blur, grain and noise.
Aside that its still pretty good.
To work on :
1-FX
2-Background
3-Balance between your personal style and the generic realistic style that the industry demands. We can talk about this in class.