Wow, this is very very good. First image works because its cinematic. ANd has nice foreground elements.
Only one comment here but its not that dramatic, i mean you could leave it this way. BUt the girl is straight up in the middle of the image, i would test and see if i move it a bit to the right like so.
Now in terms of design, its ok but mainly because you nailed the values ( light) and the realism.
So this shows everyone, that a good presentation can make a normal design look great. ANd the opposite is also true.
This is not a design class, so you do not have to push the designs but if i were you, later one, for my portfolio, i would improve the designs of the boots and mecha. Right now the boots are too cartoony. Old school design. ANd the vehicle also looks a bit funny with the chubby little legs etc. But do that later on. Your composition was great, simple and solid. Good job.
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