Aha .... i knew it. You did not break away from the tool.
I will show you some examples this afternoon. YOu have to force your art on the tool and not the other way around.
Ok so this has potential, aside a couple of things i would say its ok in terms of asset placement.
1-Where is your sketch ? ;) You black and white wip ? You have to be able to provide me with a sketch. Because what do you do if you have your client asking for a sketch or a wip and you cannot give it to him because you are using 3d? 2-Your drawing is off, anatomy is off, proportions etc. So if we have time, i will show you some stuff. 3-The drapery should imply her moving forward, so it has to trail behind her. 4-There are some good ideas but the design is a bit all over the place, you should have used repetition. 5-I would have placed the prop on her uplifted hand, for importance and clarity. 6-Photobashing needs a LOT of work here. Actually thats the main prob maybe. You have some painted FX, some photos and some 3D and it is not well integrated and balanced. It has to gel.
To work on : -ANATOMY ! -Design skills -Photobashing integration -Drawing and painting skills -Gotta kick ass in FX
Aha .... i knew it. You did not break away from the tool.
ReplyDeleteI will show you some examples this afternoon.
YOu have to force your art on the tool and not the other way around.
Ok so this has potential, aside a couple of things i would say its ok in terms of asset placement.
1-Where is your sketch ? ;) You black and white wip ? You have to be able to provide me with a sketch. Because what do you do if you have your client asking for a sketch or a wip and you cannot give it to him because you are using 3d?
2-Your drawing is off, anatomy is off, proportions etc. So if we have time, i will show you some stuff.
3-The drapery should imply her moving forward, so it has to trail behind her.
4-There are some good ideas but the design is a bit all over the place, you should have used repetition.
5-I would have placed the prop on her uplifted hand, for importance and clarity.
6-Photobashing needs a LOT of work here. Actually thats the main prob maybe. You have some painted FX, some photos and some 3D and it is not well integrated and balanced. It has to gel.
To work on :
-ANATOMY !
-Design skills
-Photobashing integration
-Drawing and painting skills
-Gotta kick ass in FX