Week 2 Feedback Miguel Thumbs 01

Week 2 Feedback Miguel Thumbs 01

Hey Miguel,

Not much to say here because you did a good job with balancing the girl and her vehicle, how they are placed, and facing each other. Good. I like all of them. She seems to have a cool pose too.

There are a few mistakes with the framing of the images but easely fixed. Also you only have one vehicle design? I would say these are thumbs that need clarification.

The main issues here are the following : Design and entertainment factor.

1-The landscape is fine. But it has nothing interesting. It is super bland.  The landscape is the third most important element of this image. Make sure it is treated that way.

2-The vehicle looks like a ......

Yep, it does. Don't worry, it happens to me all the time.

3-Vehicle design. Aside my previous comment, it feels really flimsy. Like it could break anytime. Will it survive the harsh tracks ? The impacts and attacks ? How is it built? If you were a death race champion, how would your vehicle be? What would it do? WOuld it be fast ? Or strong ? Destructive or agile ? With long range attacks ? Or impact based attacks ? How will she drive this? How is she seated? 

4-Same comment as everyone....you better know where you are going before starting the painting. Drawing, design, perspective etc, lighting, all needs to be figured out and clear for you. To avoid further issues.