Hey Beth,
So, you guys will hear me say this a lot, you need to make sure you know your anatomy and where you are going with it. It is ok to be stylised but you need to make sure that it is solid.
Here the anatomy and the dress are a bit all over the place.
-Make sure you draw the body and then draw the clothes on it.
-Hands were really weak here.
-Face needs to be drawn better
-Design of the shadown creature is lacking. So is it's posing. It seems very stiff.
-Background is just a wall, without anything cool or nothing to bring to the picture and the perspective is way off.
Need to work on that more. Even if your characters were great, a bad background or prop can bring your image down.
Try to solve these issues on your own, and proceed to the final. After you submit the final, i will show you what i would have done. But for now i want you to try to figure this out by yourself.
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