Week 01 Feedback for Rajdeep BW Sketch

Week 01 Feedback for Rajdeep, Black and white WIP

Hey Rajdeep,

Not much to say here. Pretty solid.

Values seem to work.

-Make sure we can read the props, right now the ones on the left seem to fade out and merge with the rest of the image.

-I can see you used refs for the apprentice and that's why it is believable. Compared to the master behind that doesnt work because it is done without references. Make sure you take a picture to see how hands work when resting on a shoulder.

-The design of the apprentice is too bland though. His clothing needs more work, since you seem to have some indian or south east asian props in the picture, well guess how the costume should be ? 

-His head should be more interesting, add tattoos if you are going for the bald look. Tattoos shoul dbe the same culture and design of the props and costume.

I rechecked this and added more feedback. Actually your values could pop more: 

-More contrast on face and hand area.
-I changed the values of the props as suggested and add darker values on BG.
-Check the set up of  the props on the left, if you change it and create overlap and enlarge the grinding bowl, it becomes more interesting.

I'll explain tomorrow, one on one.

COntinue with the final image,