The issues are mainly your values, that are so dark, that we cant see anything. Be sure that before you start adding colors you have a clear BW sketch. Simplify everything with flat BW values. Bfore jumping to gradients and color.
I love her pose, i love the tip of the car too.
1-The cockpit area less, it sort of makes it look like a shoe. Easely fixed though by warping it down. 2-Too bad we cannot see the floor where she is standing as well. 3-The BG should be really separated from the plateform where she is. 4-Foreground elements need to be better placed and designed. 5-Floor should be designed with stuff, cables, tools, maybe some mechanic is still working on her car etc. Have fun !
Overall just a matter of learning value painting. Good job with the vibe !
Very promising Lena ! This has a great vibe.
ReplyDeleteThe issues are mainly your values, that are so dark, that we cant see anything. Be sure that before you start adding colors you have a clear BW sketch. Simplify everything with flat BW values. Bfore jumping to gradients and color.
I love her pose, i love the tip of the car too.
1-The cockpit area less, it sort of makes it look like a shoe. Easely fixed though by warping it down.
2-Too bad we cannot see the floor where she is standing as well.
3-The BG should be really separated from the plateform where she is.
4-Foreground elements need to be better placed and designed.
5-Floor should be designed with stuff, cables, tools, maybe some mechanic is still working on her car etc. Have fun !
Overall just a matter of learning value painting. Good job with the vibe !