Still needs a lot of work, there are some good things but your drawing and painting skills need som emore work.
Overall : 1-Placement and composition. I would have placed the guy a bit more to the left. To give more space to his arm. ALso it would have created an overlap with the props behind him on the left. 2-Your final has no depth, you needed to add more BG elements in there. 3-Nice horns and face markins, but the jacket could be way more interesting in design. 4-Design of the props is super simple. Need to make them cooler. 5-Even though you went for a stylised look, you need to master realism in order for your stylised visuals to be great. So you still need to use a lot of refs and learn how light works and how materials react to it. 6-FX is weak
To work on : -Foundation skills, drawing, painting, values, color -Design, push everything to be amazing -Work more on your sketch, and your final will be better -Try using cleaner brushes, simpler brushes during the sketch phase, it is easier to make an image painterly and rough than to clean a rough image. -DO value and color studies -Do life studies
Hey Jin,
ReplyDeleteStill needs a lot of work, there are some good things but your drawing and painting skills need som emore work.
Overall :
1-Placement and composition. I would have placed the guy a bit more to the left. To give more space to his arm. ALso it would have created an overlap with the props behind him on the left.
2-Your final has no depth, you needed to add more BG elements in there.
3-Nice horns and face markins, but the jacket could be way more interesting in design.
4-Design of the props is super simple. Need to make them cooler.
5-Even though you went for a stylised look, you need to master realism in order for your stylised visuals to be great. So you still need to use a lot of refs and learn how light works and how materials react to it.
6-FX is weak
To work on :
-Foundation skills, drawing, painting, values, color
-Design, push everything to be amazing
-Work more on your sketch, and your final will be better
-Try using cleaner brushes, simpler brushes during the sketch phase, it is easier to make an image painterly and rough than to clean a rough image.
-DO value and color studies
-Do life studies