This is my WIP so far i plan is to do a clean line work and render. i wanted to know if you had any feedback and is it ok if i do it in Black and White.
A couple of comments mostly regarding design and drawing:
1-The face and the hair.... 2-The holo screen and the blood hand.... 3-Leg costume design 4-Cockpit design
So this no design class but later one, you could rework these elements. For me the blood hand doesnt work. I would just use smears and a bit of splatter on the windshield. The rest should be amazing. But composition is good. Good job.
This is nice ! Good job.
ReplyDeleteA couple of comments mostly regarding design and drawing:
1-The face and the hair....
2-The holo screen and the blood hand....
3-Leg costume design
4-Cockpit design
So this no design class but later one, you could rework these elements. For me the blood hand doesnt work. I would just use smears and a bit of splatter on the windshield. The rest should be amazing. But composition is good. Good job.
Thanks a lot for the feedback fred.
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