Aaaah much clearer... i can breathe easy here. Its still not perfect, but i get everything that is going on with clarity. And that is really important. I prefer to see something like this, than some failed attempt at a realistic render. BEcause our class is not a rendering or painting class.
1- Framing and compo, i would still give the mecha legs more space, and want to see them on the floor. For solidity and stability. 2-He hear is perfectly aligned with the city level. I would break that up, but its not that dramatic though. You can get away with it. 3-Nice try at perspective, next time avoid the one point perspective path, add two, or add on this other cool environmental features, like archways, destroyed racer vehicules, rock formations, banner for the race, whatever. It is feeling a bit simple at the moment.
Nice save ! Good effort on cleaning your lines and image.
Hey Beth,
ReplyDeleteAaaah much clearer... i can breathe easy here. Its still not perfect, but i get everything that is going on with clarity. And that is really important.
I prefer to see something like this, than some failed attempt at a realistic render. BEcause our class is not a rendering or painting class.
1- Framing and compo, i would still give the mecha legs more space, and want to see them on the floor. For solidity and stability.
2-He hear is perfectly aligned with the city level. I would break that up, but its not that dramatic though. You can get away with it.
3-Nice try at perspective, next time avoid the one point perspective path, add two, or add on this other cool environmental features, like archways, destroyed racer vehicules, rock formations, banner for the race, whatever. It is feeling a bit simple at the moment.
Nice save ! Good effort on cleaning your lines and image.