May 24, 2017

Week 7- Abby WIP

Okay so i totally scrapped my thumbnails from last week because they sucked. Hopefully Fred you'll see this soon for some feedback on composition?

 By the way it's not going to stay 100% rainbow, my underpainting is just kind of ridiculous, and I know it's still really rough. All nighter huzzah




I'm thinking of zooming in a bit to the upper left so someone looking at it can actually see the faces, but it ruins the outline created by the figures +bathtub+drapery. Thoughts?
 
Closeup

1 comment:

  1. Much better idea and compo that's for sure. Points for that. Now yea...would have been cool to finish this.

    Also you need too try out more stuff for the floor. It feels cool but its unclear. Would it be better to make it a huge drapery with the pattern on ? Your call.

    The colors are nice but you will have to tone them down so they are not saturated all over the image.

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