1-Its too blurry and foggy. It makes your image lose its dynamism. 2-Scifi and Hard Surface should always be sharp, with strong edges and lines. 3-Design in high tech imagery is paramount and extremely important, her costume, the gun, the BG...they are lacking much in design. 4-Too many light sources. 5-Perspective of the gun could be exagerated. 6-FX could be much sharper 7-Characters should be ten times more sharp than anything else. ANd they should POP from the background. THis is mainly a value issue here. You ahev values in the characters and in the background that are close or the same and that kills the depth and the visiblity.
Good job Efe,
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1-Its too blurry and foggy. It makes your image lose its dynamism.
2-Scifi and Hard Surface should always be sharp, with strong edges and lines.
3-Design in high tech imagery is paramount and extremely important, her costume, the gun, the BG...they are lacking much in design.
4-Too many light sources.
5-Perspective of the gun could be exagerated.
6-FX could be much sharper
7-Characters should be ten times more sharp than anything else. ANd they should POP from the background. THis is mainly a value issue here. You ahev values in the characters and in the background that are close or the same and that kills the depth and the visiblity.