Some cool ideas. But some composition mistakes here and there. On the three first images. Can you tell what is the mistake ?
As an early wip its ok but its super rough still. You need much more sketch work before the final, unless you plan to photobash or use 3d then its ok as a sketch.
I think that the focal point is to centered, or maybe the poses of the kids are not dynamic, the first thing was a little bit intentional, due to the poster format but maybe i should move the FP to the one of thirds of the image, the kids im planning to do them with photobashing and painting and the figure of the clown i want to be a little bit abstract and loosely. Thanks for the feedback
in image 1 and 2, the head of the clown is almost touching the frame.
in image 3 the kid on the left is squashed against the frame.
Image 1 and 4 have the most potential. The clown in image 1 should probably bi larger, and focus on his head. In image 2, there are only 2 legs. Two is not a dynamic number. Make it 3, or four in different scarier more dynamic poses of legs. And we should see the eyes, and teeth in the dark with a hint of the face. The kids should look more tense. In every image, except 1. That one has serious expressions is ok.
Hey Miguel,
ReplyDeleteSome cool ideas. But some composition mistakes here and there. On the three first images. Can you tell what is the mistake ?
As an early wip its ok but its super rough still. You need much more sketch work before the final, unless you plan to photobash or use 3d then its ok as a sketch.
I think that the focal point is to centered, or maybe the poses of the kids are not dynamic, the first thing was a little bit intentional, due to the poster format but maybe i should move the FP to the one of thirds of the image, the kids im planning to do them with photobashing and painting and the figure of the clown i want to be a little bit abstract and loosely. Thanks for the feedback
ReplyDeletein image 1 and 2, the head of the clown is almost touching the frame.
ReplyDeletein image 3 the kid on the left is squashed against the frame.
Image 1 and 4 have the most potential. The clown in image 1 should probably bi larger, and focus on his head. In image 2, there are only 2 legs. Two is not a dynamic number. Make it 3, or four in different scarier more dynamic poses of legs. And we should see the eyes, and teeth in the dark with a hint of the face. The kids should look more tense. In every image, except 1. That one has serious expressions is ok.