Feels like almost no progress compared to last week.
Composition is almost ok, you have a tangent with the smile of the clown and the head of the girl. 1-Too shy with the blood, and the city is not present enough. Also too shy with the background texture. Title too small, again very shy with it. Your painting is lacking a lot of confidence.
Also, i know you are more environment oriented and that you'll use more photos and 3d to create environments in your career, but either way you have to train your foundations more. Drawing and painting. You can't escape. All those fancy american LA concept artists, they go to do life drawing and they go do landscape paintings as well. They are always training to improve their foundation skills. You need to step it up in that regard Miguel, its very important. That's holding you back right now.
There is no sign of a strong light in your painting, or of a backlight to create drama.
You are not using your edges appropriately etc... Same things i told Ro, you guys need to study lighting.
Still needs a lot of work Miguel.
ReplyDeleteFeels like almost no progress compared to last week.
Composition is almost ok, you have a tangent with the smile of the clown and the head of the girl.
1-Too shy with the blood, and the city is not present enough.
Also too shy with the background texture. Title too small, again very shy with it. Your painting is lacking a lot of confidence.
Also, i know you are more environment oriented and that you'll use more photos and 3d to create environments in your career, but either way you have to train your foundations more. Drawing and painting. You can't escape. All those fancy american LA concept artists, they go to do life drawing and they go do landscape paintings as well. They are always training to improve their foundation skills. You need to step it up in that regard Miguel, its very important. That's holding you back right now.
There is no sign of a strong light in your painting, or of a backlight to create drama.
You are not using your edges appropriately etc... Same things i told Ro, you guys need to study lighting.