Cool moods. Good job. Same comment as Seif. The storytelling is missing. We have a guy with a gun but why? It is not very clear. What is he shooting at? Why is he running. Etc. Check your poses as well. They could be better drawn. Or coller or both. Ex. Pose 1. Pose 4 is good though. We just need a hint of whats going on? Where is he, whats happening around him? Is he a cop? A gangster? Is he in a horror setting? A suspens serial killer drama? Or mayb a mafia story? Or all of that ?
Cool moods. Good job.
ReplyDeleteSame comment as Seif. The storytelling is missing. We have a guy with a gun but why? It is not very clear.
What is he shooting at? Why is he running. Etc. Check your poses as well. They could be better drawn. Or coller or both. Ex. Pose 1. Pose 4 is good though. We just need a hint of whats going on? Where is he, whats happening around him? Is he a cop? A gangster? Is he in a horror setting? A suspens serial killer drama? Or mayb a mafia story? Or all of that ?