May 24, 2017

Week 7- Lena WIP

Can i have some feedbacks for the composition, values, color and rendering please ?

2 comments:

  1. Hey Lena,

    1-Try and focus on increasing the quality of both monsters, because they need more work in terms of painting. COmpared to the face of the girl who's rendering is better.
    2-Add more detail on the body of the girl. She is the main focus so her clothes should be more detailed.
    3-Add particles, flying leaves with the wind etc
    4-That tree feels pretty lonely up there. Can you find a solution for that ? I have a couple of ideas that i can show you tomorrow, but i would like you to try and find that on your own.

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