Hi Fred, so here are two sketches for my forgotten maiden. She is a undead lady that was forgotten when the mansion was abandoned. Now she is wandering through the dark halls with her cursed lamp.
The first one is a bit more calm and easier to read because every element has it's own place in the image while she is passing by the viewer giving them a quick glance. That way you can go from the lamp to her other hand to her head and back to the lamp.
The second one has the important elements closer together and she is turning into the viewer like she saw you, making it more dramatic but also a bit harder to read I find. (the chains from he lamp to her right hand run in front of her... I overpainted the sketch lines and just noticed. sry for that...)
Let me know what you think.
Hey Sally,
ReplyDeleteBoth are really good actually. Yes the fact that the second one has the maiden looking at the viewer is more dramatic, but the cloth straps are cooler in the first image.
Its up to you, choose your favorite, both are good.
Good job !