1-Golden rule: No genitalia in full regalia. Avoid. If you need to do it for work, ok but other than that, find a way to hide it. You never know who is hiring.
2-Break your 3d posing. Take this and push the pose even further, transfrm, and distort , cut and replace, paint the holes in photoshop. Push it so it becomes less 3d stiff and more dynamic and natural pose.
3-Lighting: The light shape of the door should be on the ground, adding a compositional element.
4-His face is not pushed enough in expression. Very bland and he has a slight smile but its not crazy creepy.
5-Proportions could be more exagerated, and cooler in design. Same for the stains on his body.
6-Tilt the door away from the guy, creating more distortion and dynamism.
7-More work on the BG would be needed, as in storytelling elements. Blood trails, impacts , debris etc.
8-Work on the lighting to increase the horror feel.
Very cool, has a lot of potential.
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1-Golden rule: No genitalia in full regalia. Avoid. If you need to do it for work, ok but other than that, find a way to hide it. You never know who is hiring.
2-Break your 3d posing. Take this and push the pose even further, transfrm, and distort , cut and replace, paint the holes in photoshop. Push it so it becomes less 3d stiff and more dynamic and natural pose.
3-Lighting: The light shape of the door should be on the ground, adding a compositional element.
4-His face is not pushed enough in expression. Very bland and he has a slight smile but its not crazy creepy.
5-Proportions could be more exagerated, and cooler in design. Same for the stains on his body.
6-Tilt the door away from the guy, creating more distortion and dynamism.
7-More work on the BG would be needed, as in storytelling elements. Blood trails, impacts , debris etc.
8-Work on the lighting to increase the horror feel.
Great progress.