1-Folds !!!! Painting and drawing folds. 2-Edges. Your edge work here is lacking a lot. The sword should be lasso tool sharp. His face and his torso, should have some of the sharpest edges in the image. Right now some areas are really foggy and blurred. Speed paintings are usually super sharp. Check Yun Ling and Mullins. 3-BG could use more work, its waaaay too simple and blurry. 4-Hair could be flowing better and leaves should be flying here and there creating movement.
Good job. This is not bad.
ReplyDeleteOk so things to improve:
1-Folds !!!! Painting and drawing folds.
2-Edges. Your edge work here is lacking a lot. The sword should be lasso tool sharp.
His face and his torso, should have some of the sharpest edges in the image. Right now some areas are really foggy and blurred. Speed paintings are usually super sharp. Check Yun Ling and Mullins.
3-BG could use more work, its waaaay too simple and blurry.
4-Hair could be flowing better and leaves should be flying here and there creating movement.