Still : 1-Too soft and low contrast. So values and Edges to work on. 2-Colors. Too many and saturation is all over the place. Make sure to keep saturated colors around your focus areas. 3-Drawing of hands 4-That left column feels like i dont know where it is...is it closer than the guy ....at his level.... or farther than him? 5-Its lacking more punch. The flags help a lot but there should be more maybe behind him, maybe some feathers or white john woo birds you know to increase his sort of regal presence. etc
Not bad Zach !
ReplyDeleteStill :
1-Too soft and low contrast.
So values and Edges to work on.
2-Colors. Too many and saturation is all over the place. Make sure to keep saturated colors around your focus areas.
3-Drawing of hands
4-That left column feels like i dont know where it is...is it closer than the guy ....at his level.... or farther than him?
5-Its lacking more punch. The flags help a lot but there should be more maybe behind him, maybe some feathers or white john woo birds you know to increase his sort of regal presence. etc