Very good Lena. I can see you really put a lot of effort compared to passed assignements.
Not much to say here that i did not say in the sketch:
1-Its mostly a matter of values again. How to separate your character from the BG. COul dbe with some fog or smoke, or by increasing the light values of the background or the other way around, making the girl lighter than the BG.
2-That light from the roof should , not more intense but more present. As a clear beam of light .
3-Her hair could have followed her jumping direction, creating movement.
Other than that a bit of work on your colors, it still feels a lot like just layer modes. So basic painting and color foundation to work on.
Very good Lena. I can see you really put a lot of effort compared to passed assignements.
ReplyDeleteNot much to say here that i did not say in the sketch:
1-Its mostly a matter of values again.
How to separate your character from the BG. COul dbe with some fog or smoke, or by increasing the light values of the background or the other way around, making the girl lighter than the BG.
2-That light from the roof should , not more intense but more present. As a clear beam of light .
3-Her hair could have followed her jumping direction, creating movement.
Other than that a bit of work on your colors, it still feels a lot like just layer modes. So basic painting and color foundation to work on.