Great progress here. I like how every week its better than the last one.
Ok so :
1-Where is the background ? It took me a while to understand the idea on the floor. Its a great idea, but it is painted so soft .... its difficult to understand. Make that floor awesome, i want to see the texture of it, what is it made of? A stone floor ? Or maybe the symbol is painted with strong china ink, and a giant brush like the text.
2-Their is a weird balance between your text and your character.....also it feels that the guy should have more space in front of him....and maybe the text and the character should create a same shape and overlap each other. Asian texts are so cool, they are used as design elements.
3-Design: The issue here is that ....you went and did an image with a chines vibe. And with all the great material and references out there... it had to be much better than this.
In google i wrote, chines poster design....and died under the amount of awesomeness.
Again, i feel you guys are not doing enough research... we will talk about this in class.
Hey Alex,
ReplyDeleteGreat progress here. I like how every week its better than the last one.
Ok so :
1-Where is the background ? It took me a while to understand the idea on the floor. Its a great idea, but it is painted so soft .... its difficult to understand. Make that floor awesome, i want to see the texture of it, what is it made of? A stone floor ? Or maybe the symbol is painted with strong china ink, and a giant brush like the text.
2-Their is a weird balance between your text and your character.....also it feels that the guy should have more space in front of him....and maybe the text and the character should create a same shape and overlap each other. Asian texts are so cool, they are used as design elements.
3-Design: The issue here is that ....you went and did an image with a chines vibe. And with all the great material and references out there... it had to be much better than this.
In google i wrote, chines poster design....and died under the amount of awesomeness.
Again, i feel you guys are not doing enough research... we will talk about this in class.