1-You need to learn how to draw and paint humans. Right now i can tell its 3d, mainly because of the hands and the face. So you just need to work hard on those foundations. No escape. 2-Light and values are ok, but they could be much better. Definetly much more juice on the sun light hitting the roof and the guy. On the windows etc. The props inside and the people are poorly visible because the values are similar. It needs a bit more light inside. But its still really good. 3-Scale is still an issue on the hero. I would scale him down. Also if this is a fan art, it doesnt really look like the guy from shamploo.
Second one. For sure ;)
ReplyDeleteOk great job but :
1-You need to learn how to draw and paint humans. Right now i can tell its 3d, mainly because of the hands and the face.
So you just need to work hard on those foundations. No escape.
2-Light and values are ok, but they could be much better. Definetly much more juice on the sun light hitting the roof and the guy. On the windows etc.
The props inside and the people are poorly visible because the values are similar. It needs a bit more light inside. But its still really good.
3-Scale is still an issue on the hero. I would scale him down.
Also if this is a fan art, it doesnt really look like the guy from shamploo.