1-Composition is a bit weak 2-The camera is way to tilted! 3-Seems off topic, its supposed to be an intergalactic thief. This feels like a normal warrior. The only scifi element is that you have darth vador in there. 4-The guy seems to be jumping in a weird way. Check your drawing and make sure the anatomy is good. That bamboo staff is super weird man. Did you trace your perspective lines ? 5-At this stage i am expecting much more efforts from you guys. This image should be much better than your previous work ! 6-It feels too simple, just a random guy jumping in a bamboo forest. Put more effort in the story you are telling. 7-You should be exploring more options, not just settling for the first sketch. Research, try out different ideas.
No worries Alex, i am pushing you guys hard in this last weeks, so you improve more! You can keep the design of the main character if you want. Just try to make sure we understand that he is a thief.
You can do better than this Alex come on !
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2-The camera is way to tilted!
3-Seems off topic, its supposed to be an intergalactic thief. This feels like a normal warrior. The only scifi element is that you have darth vador in there.
4-The guy seems to be jumping in a weird way. Check your drawing and make sure the anatomy is good. That bamboo staff is super weird man. Did you trace your perspective lines ?
5-At this stage i am expecting much more efforts from you guys. This image should be much better than your previous work !
6-It feels too simple, just a random guy jumping in a bamboo forest. Put more effort in the story you are telling.
7-You should be exploring more options, not just settling for the first sketch. Research, try out different ideas.
Thank you for the feedback, I'm going do another one and will be the intergalactic thief ,sorry for this one!
DeleteNo worries Alex, i am pushing you guys hard in this last weeks, so you improve more! You can keep the design of the main character if you want. Just try to make sure we understand that he is a thief.
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